literature

Tears

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Your shouting
Reverberates through my
Tear-stained heart
I say the wrong thing-
What else is new-
And your beautiful face
Shows your sorrow

Your breathing
Captivates the very
Essence of my affection
But I said the wrong thing-
Why me?-
I watch your retreating figure
Through the tears in my eyes
I'm not sure exactly what I meant with this poem- it was one of those things that just jumped out of my pencil. I think that the one punctuation mark is very significant to the poem... why do you think so? I'd like to know your opinions. So, please leave a comment! I love to hear what other people think.
:heart:
Ellie
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